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September 24, 2011
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9-24-11 Finished I think by AzeeraTheNinja 9-24-11 Finished I think by AzeeraTheNinja
EDIT: Okay umm... I thickened the hair just a bit... how is it? <<"""""""
Does it need more?
I kinda wanted it to be that "fading" look to the hair in a way, kinda like how everything is on the left and almost nothing on the right... composition....? <<""""""


Okay, so I added more to it...

Can you tell me if this is good? If there's something I should add? I have the WIP piece still up and this is the "finished" one, but I feel there's something missing or it isn't as great as I thought it would be <<"""""


Art (c) me XD (first time ever putting that tag, didn't think about it until now! )
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0hgravity Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the additions. Really cool.
yeah her hair looks a bit thin but honestly it doesn't ruin it for me so... :shrug:
AzeeraTheNinja Dec 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh okay, thanks! :giggle:
Yeah I really need to fix that hair eventually :nuu:
0hgravity Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yeah.
KaraNari Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is amazing and I love it. I love the simple colours and the geometric shapes, and I love her hair!!! My only suggestion is to define the headphones a bit more so it doesn't get lost in the hair!! Otherwise, this is awesomee!!!
AzeeraTheNinja Nov 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks! :blush:
I think that's due to the head shape that I had. I might redo this soon now that I remember it XD
Maybe if I made the headshape a little better then the headphones won't be so lost in hair :)
KaraNari Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the headshape is fine! I think the headphones just need to be lightened up a bit! :)
AzeeraTheNinja Nov 20, 2011  Student General Artist
okidoki! :)
Wistful-Night Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, she looks so serene, it's really nice~ the 'cold' color scheme also adds to the mood. I love it.
AzeeraTheNinja Sep 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks! :blush:

I'm really glad you like it! :)
PyroniusAlpha Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lookin rad, Ally, your work is getting better and better!

In regards to what everyone is saying about the hair looking thin, I'd hazard it's partially due to the white/blue poking through from the background mostly. It creates unnatural highlights in the hair, making it look like there's not much substance to it. Maybe try creating a layer around the head, under her hair, and fill the highlights in with a dark, solid color? Or you could just fill the gaps in, whatever...

If you've left it to give it a blended look, it could be a good idea to give her some solid blue highlights over the top instead? Dunno... Up to you, really.

Her head is just a liiiiittle bit long and squarish too. A tricky one to fix, but not impossible with the Liquify tool in PS, and a bit of time... :)

Looking really good though, I dig me some techno-anime. ^^
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