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9-24-11 Finished I think by AzeeraTheNinja 9-24-11 Finished I think by AzeeraTheNinja
EDIT: Okay umm... I thickened the hair just a bit... how is it? <<"""""""
Does it need more?
I kinda wanted it to be that "fading" look to the hair in a way, kinda like how everything is on the left and almost nothing on the right... composition....? <<""""""

/EDIT

Okay, so I added more to it...

Can you tell me if this is good? If there's something I should add? I have the WIP piece still up and this is the "finished" one, but I feel there's something missing or it isn't as great as I thought it would be <<"""""

Help?

Art (c) me XD (first time ever putting that tag, didn't think about it until now! )
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the additions. Really cool.
yeah her hair looks a bit thin but honestly it doesn't ruin it for me so... :shrug:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Oh okay, thanks! :giggle:
Yeah I really need to fix that hair eventually :nuu:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yeah.
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KaraNari Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is amazing and I love it. I love the simple colours and the geometric shapes, and I love her hair!!! My only suggestion is to define the headphones a bit more so it doesn't get lost in the hair!! Otherwise, this is awesomee!!!
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Aww, thanks! :blush:
I think that's due to the head shape that I had. I might redo this soon now that I remember it XD
Maybe if I made the headshape a little better then the headphones won't be so lost in hair :)
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KaraNari Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the headshape is fine! I think the headphones just need to be lightened up a bit! :)
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Interface Designer
okidoki! :)
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Wistful-Night Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, she looks so serene, it's really nice~ the 'cold' color scheme also adds to the mood. I love it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Aww, thanks! :blush:

I'm really glad you like it! :)
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PyroniusAlpha Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lookin rad, Ally, your work is getting better and better!

In regards to what everyone is saying about the hair looking thin, I'd hazard it's partially due to the white/blue poking through from the background mostly. It creates unnatural highlights in the hair, making it look like there's not much substance to it. Maybe try creating a layer around the head, under her hair, and fill the highlights in with a dark, solid color? Or you could just fill the gaps in, whatever...

If you've left it to give it a blended look, it could be a good idea to give her some solid blue highlights over the top instead? Dunno... Up to you, really.

Her head is just a liiiiittle bit long and squarish too. A tricky one to fix, but not impossible with the Liquify tool in PS, and a bit of time... :)

Looking really good though, I dig me some techno-anime. ^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Ahh, I see what you mean... Thanks!
I'll keep that in mind and see if I have time to edit it again :giggle:

Thanks again! :dummy:
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Iced-Stars Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
I really like the way the composition sort of fades into oblivion going from left to right. It's a very cool effect.
COOL BEANS YO.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Haha, thanks XD
And glad you got the composition! Someone said something about the hair wisps being weird but... it's art... so... it doesn't have to make sense for me I guess <<"""

THANK YOU... UM.... DAWG.
:paranoid:
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SmartWriterDude Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
Interesting aesthetics, a bit cyberpunk, and it definitely has a dark, tragic feel to it.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thanks! :D
I think XD
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SmartWriterDude Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
I don't know about you, but I'm quite fond of such aesthetics. Well done :D.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Haha, oh okay, then thanks a bunch! :dummy:
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StevenForeman Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay this is just too cool for words.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Oh gosh thanks :blush:
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Sapphene Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I LOVE this! the facial expression you made is amazing! And the hair :omg: the way it's all blowing in the wind! Love love love it :love:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Aww, thanks :blush:
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yami-joey Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
This is definitely awesome. I love the colors.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Awww, thanks :blush:
I'm glad you like it :)
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KumoSama Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I like the tech setting a lot, it looks really cool and I love especially the colouring ;)
What I would suggest though is some light on the metal, to give a reflective effect and to just... Thicken up the hair a bit. Right now it nearly looks unnaturally thinned out :(
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thanks! :)

Ah, yeah, I see what you mean ^^;
I knew something was off about it, but I wasn't sure (and at the moment I just wanted it done already XD ).

Thanks again!
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Eullie Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting~ this gives out a computer-y feel and sort of tech-like setting.
The idea of her hair being blown is pretty appealing, but considering the setting, it breaks the mood. Also, it is strange to see pieces of her hair is cut off.
Creating a shine around the character was a good effect, and I have to say that the background is pretty creative and simple.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thanks! :D

Haha, yeah I thought about more of making it look cool, not much of it making sense XD I'm going to thicken out the hair a bit and see how that looks (due to another comment being made).

Thanks again! Appreciate the comment! :)
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Eullie Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ just glad I could help a bit.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Interface Designer
:meow:
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SirStyx Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student Photographer
I laike
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thanks! :)
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