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I'm no one of importance.
Even if I did have a name you wouldn't remember it;
It means nothing.

My physical stature is something you wouldn't be able to comprehend,
But maybe you might remember my emotional being...

I am unstable, alone, and unbearably self conscious.
I think things I shouldn't, only exploring the depths of what you call an imagination
To only end up falling deeper into the maze to where I may never return.
I am set on business when there is nothing to do.
But when I work I focus on pleasure.
I have theories that have already been thought of, just not at such an immature stage.
I think of things that others have not, or so I think.
I am a disappointment to those around me,
No matter what I do
I hurt those closest to me
When I care too much.
I am someone you are familiar with,
but you do not realize I am also familiar with you.
I am someone that you need to know,
And yet you continue to ignore me.
I want to share more with you
And I want to share with you things that you should find interesting
And most of these things you may also find important.
I would like to have a conversation with you,
To where we both understand what's going on.
I will tell you everything you need to know.
As soon as you tell me what I need to know
And what exactly you're trying to accomplish
When you try to ignore me.


Hello, I am

You
EDIT:
Yeah just edited this old thing. It's actually one of my favorite ideas so I was looking at it again and fixed it up a little.
Feedback appreciated~ =)
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The title is actually where the story starts and the poem is the response, just letting you guys know.

This is another quick write of mine and actually this was just an idea I had suddenly and I really wanted to type it out, but the format on this computer can't be used on my home computer so I'll just edit this one later.

I hope you like it ^^
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is truly beautiful and introspectrive. I love it! :D
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! =)

And this is one of my favorites, so I'm glad you think so =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome I know its nice when someone actually puts the effort to say what they think about your work. From what I've seen of yours you seem like a really good artist and I'm not just sayin that. It was cool to create a group to help other artists out.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Haha, it really is =)
Aw thanks, though I'm not that great, there are so many others that are better than me, quite a few in that group of mine XD
And I always like helping people ^^ I think helping them also helps me at the same time, and I just feel like its the nice thing to do and its what this community is for =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are exactly right. That why I love DA so much now before people were always just negative to each other, but now people really try to help each other out.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Yeah, trolls are sometimes a real downer to communities like this <<"
But there are always those people that want to help ^^ So it makes my day a little brighter to see someone care about something =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yep (^_^)
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
huh...reading my mind or something. it is quite interesting. i think that you are worth remembering. i used to have these thoughts...some of them still even come across my head. who we are sometimes isn't important, who we can become is. if i were different from this in any way, chances are i might be off by two. i could still become it. the question is really who you want to be...if i am you and you are me.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Hmmm, interesting thoughts, and I totally agree, but who you are builds up to who you can become. ^^
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
precisely. which is why i hold my past to my mind...if you don't know who you were before, then how can you know if you changed...?
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student Interface Designer
That's true
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
still i am glad to see that there is another person who thinks about these things...it is too dull to just go through life without thinking about the things that matter pretty much the most.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Interface Designer
I am too, though this doesn't really explain a LOT of who I am, but it has quite a bit of info on it XD
And I completely agree, these are things that make us oblivious and ignorant of the things/people/emotions around and in us.
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011
:iconclapplz: YES!!! so am i to assume you are wondering who you are as well? very interesting indeed if that is the case.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Haha, I guess in a way XD
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PhoenixEverAfter Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I pictured a person standing in front of mirror listening to their reflection talk to them. I love poems that pull on my imagination like that
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Hmmm... I didn't even think of it that way XD
Thanks~ Glad it had that effect! =)
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PhoenixEverAfter Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^^

And thanks for the fav on 'Blue and Purple Agony' you're awesome ^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Student Interface Designer
You're very welcome! =)
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PhoenixEverAfter Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This very good, I love it!
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thanks! This was one of my favorite pieces at the time actually :love:
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PhoenixEverAfter Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome ^^
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Anihillus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
Wow, this was a powerful piece, and oddly convicting.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks ^^ I actually changed the ending a little from the original (wrote this a while back) and at first I didn't mean to notify my watchers of the change, but then again I got a lot of new friends since I first posted this so I decided to update it and let my new watchers read it ^^
I'm glad you like it! ^^
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Anihillus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
Makes sense. Glad you did. It's certainly a thought provoking poem.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Haha, yeah, but that was written during my "depressed" phase I guess you could say ^^; So I'm not sure when cool stuff like this will come out..
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Anihillus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
Well, all your stuff is cool, they just show different aspects of you.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Well... I guess that's about right, though i don't consider my stuff that great ^^; But that's just part of something else, so anyway, how's the weather over there?
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Anihillus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
The weather? It's cold and bitter. Winter's coming around the corner.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Oh, I'm sorry to hear that =( It's kinda cold around here too, but not too cold yet, it's kind of creeping up and waiting to pounce with a cold front that's supposed to be here soon I think
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greekaholic Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
It's good! Very creepy ending and very emotional!
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks ^^ Glad you like it!
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greekaholic Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010
You're welcome!
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This deviation has been featured here: [link]
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks ^^
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No worries :)
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Here [link] rather
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is brilliant! It shows exactly what my mind is like. You put into words what my mind puts into play.

Very well done!
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks a lot! ^^
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:

I am a mixture
of whispered dreams
and broken ideas.
words stuffed with
pictures of my heart
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks for the comment and fav ^^

Always so much greater than mine ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
is not! :poke:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Interface Designer
It is ^^
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
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Bel-serpente Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010
Oh my god!!! That's really good!! and as soon as I reached the end it all made sense and yet did not and so I am cofused but yet I am set strait on my path. The path to express and counicate, the road to understanding and listening, the jerony of time and persitance. This path and no other will take me to enlitnment and enrchment^^ thank you for showing me the way to understand myself and others^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Wow thanks ^^

And You're very welcome ^^
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Bel-serpente Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
I like big words and complex stuff^^ So I really liked what you did with the whole introducing your mind thing^^
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Thanks again ^^ glad you liked it ^^
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Bel-serpente Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
:glomp:
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