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I'm no one of importance.
Even if I did have a name you wouldn't remember it;
It means nothing.

My physical stature is something you wouldn't be able to comprehend,
But maybe you might remember my emotional being...

I am unstable, alone, and unbearably self conscious.
I think things I shouldn't, only exploring the depths of what you call an imagination
To only end up falling deeper into the maze to where I may never return.
I am set on business when there is nothing to do.
But when I work I focus on pleasure.
I have theories that have already been thought of, just not at such an immature stage.
I think of things that others have not, or so I think.
I am a disappointment to those around me,
No matter what I do
I hurt those closest to me
When I care too much.
I am someone you are familiar with,
but you do not realize I am also familiar with you.
I am someone that you need to know,
And yet you continue to ignore me.
I want to share more with you
And I want to share with you things that you should find interesting
And most of these things you may also find important.
I would like to have a conversation with you,
To where we both understand what's going on.
I will tell you everything you need to know.
As soon as you tell me what I need to know
And what exactly you're trying to accomplish
When you try to ignore me.


Hello, I am

You
EDIT:
Yeah just edited this old thing. It's actually one of my favorite ideas so I was looking at it again and fixed it up a little.
Feedback appreciated~ =)
/EDIT

The title is actually where the story starts and the poem is the response, just letting you guys know.

This is another quick write of mine and actually this was just an idea I had suddenly and I really wanted to type it out, but the format on this computer can't be used on my home computer so I'll just edit this one later.

I hope you like it ^^
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is truly beautiful and introspectrive. I love it! :D
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! =)

And this is one of my favorites, so I'm glad you think so =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome I know its nice when someone actually puts the effort to say what they think about your work. From what I've seen of yours you seem like a really good artist and I'm not just sayin that. It was cool to create a group to help other artists out.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Haha, it really is =)
Aw thanks, though I'm not that great, there are so many others that are better than me, quite a few in that group of mine XD
And I always like helping people ^^ I think helping them also helps me at the same time, and I just feel like its the nice thing to do and its what this community is for =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are exactly right. That why I love DA so much now before people were always just negative to each other, but now people really try to help each other out.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Yeah, trolls are sometimes a real downer to communities like this <<"
But there are always those people that want to help ^^ So it makes my day a little brighter to see someone care about something =)
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yep (^_^)
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
huh...reading my mind or something. it is quite interesting. i think that you are worth remembering. i used to have these thoughts...some of them still even come across my head. who we are sometimes isn't important, who we can become is. if i were different from this in any way, chances are i might be off by two. i could still become it. the question is really who you want to be...if i am you and you are me.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Hmmm, interesting thoughts, and I totally agree, but who you are builds up to who you can become. ^^
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CaptainParanoia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
precisely. which is why i hold my past to my mind...if you don't know who you were before, then how can you know if you changed...?
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