literature

'Who are you?'

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I'm no one of importance.
Even if I did have a name you wouldn't remember it;
It means nothing.

My physical stature is something you wouldn't be able to comprehend,
But maybe you might remember my emotional being...

I am unstable, alone, and unbearably self conscious.
I think things I shouldn't, only exploring the depths of what you call an imagination
To only end up falling deeper into the maze to where I may never return.
I am set on business when there is nothing to do.
But when I work I focus on pleasure.
I have theories that have already been thought of, just not at such an immature stage.
I think of things that others have not, or so I think.
I am a disappointment to those around me,
No matter what I do
I hurt those closest to me
When I care too much.
I am someone you are familiar with,
but you do not realize I am also familiar with you.
I am someone that you need to know,
And yet you continue to ignore me.
I want to share more with you
And I want to share with you things that you should find interesting
And most of these things you may also find important.
I would like to have a conversation with you,
To where we both understand what's going on.
I will tell you everything you need to know.
As soon as you tell me what I need to know
And what exactly you're trying to accomplish
When you try to ignore me.


Hello, I am

You
EDIT:
Yeah just edited this old thing. It's actually one of my favorite ideas so I was looking at it again and fixed it up a little.
Feedback appreciated~ =)
/EDIT

The title is actually where the story starts and the poem is the response, just letting you guys know.

This is another quick write of mine and actually this was just an idea I had suddenly and I really wanted to type it out, but the format on this computer can't be used on my home computer so I'll just edit this one later.

I hope you like it ^^
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DeathNoteGrrrrrrrL's avatar
This is truly beautiful and introspectrive. I love it! :D